Written statements should not state or imply that all or none (or always or never) assertions.
This sentence implies that all people living in Arkansas share this trait, which is untrue.
This sentence better acknowledges that the writer is not assuming that all Arkansans share this trait.
Support your assertions with resources and research. Do not rely on your beliefs or experiences.
This sentence relies on the authors experiences and is not supported by evidence.
These sentences provide evidence to support the author's claims.
Bias can be both negative and positive. Try to write in a balanced and avoid being critical or complimentary of a given topic or entity.
Being overly complimentary of a electric cars is creating a bias in this piece of writing.
This version is more balanced.
When referring to people, only use descriptive terms when they are necessary for conveying meaning. Be precise without being overly specific. Pay close attention to your language choices when writing about age, disability, gender identity, sexual orientation, racial or ethnic groups, or socioeconomic terms. The APA Style Guide has an extensive section covering language choices for these groups of participants/patients/clients.
It is unclear from this sentence what age the participants were.
Participant groups are more clearly and specifically described in this sentence.
Use language that respects the terms people use for themselves, while acknowledging that language changes over time and there is often disagreement within groups about best practices for language. Avoid using descriptive terms as collective nouns to describe broad groups of people (“the poor”). Be careful when comparing groups so as not to create a false hierarchy. Do not compare groups to “normal” people or “the general public.”
This sentence uses an adjective (gay) as a noun to describe a group of people. It also compares that group to the "general public" implying that people who are gay are in some way less than.
In this example lesbians and gay men are referred to with appropriate terms and compared to a distinct group in a way that does not create a hierarchy.
Note that when listing more than one group the first-mentioned group is implied to be the standard. Carefully consider the order you use to refer to groups of people, considering options such as alphabetical order or sample size order.
Language |
# of participants |
English | 93 |
Spanish | 2015 |
Chinese | 42 |
French | 7 |
Arabic | 18 |
Tagalog | 3 |
The above chart appears to order participants' languages by the societal default, implying that English is the "standard" language.
Language |
# of participants |
Arabic | 18 |
Chinese | 42 |
English | 93 |
French | 7 |
Spanish | 105 |
Tagalog | 3 |
By ordering participants' languages alphabetically the implication that English is the "default" language is removed.
This content inspired and informed by the following resources: Scholarly Voice: Avoiding Bias (Walden University Writing Center); General Principles for Reducing Bias (APA Style)